Denise M Taylor

Writing Consultant I Editor I Proofreader

Sometimes you just don’t see the errors in your writing because you have either read it too many times, or you are more interested in the content and layout.

My editing and proofreading service will provide that essential objective ‘eye’.

I am an experienced editor and proofreader of most genres of fiction, including Young Adult, Literary, Contemporary, Mystery, Historical and Crime novels.

I have also edited a broad range of non-fiction, including memoirs, biographies and academic books.

I provide a quote for my fee after considering editing or proofreading requirements of every project when details are sent to me. Or you may be interested in my

Agent/Publisher submission editing package (see below)

So I look forward to ‘hearing’ from you via my Contact page or directly via my email: denise@denisemtaylor.com.au

 

Editing

aims to ensure that the content/narrative flows logically.

makes sure the formatting/paragraph structure is coherent.

often suggests that the text needs to be rearranged, or that a section is repetitive or verbose, or that connections are missing, or that a chapter or section within the chapter could be rewritten or reduced.

Is a copyedit or a structural edit required?

When I complete a structural edit, l recommend that the document/manuscript is returned to me for copyediting and/or proofreading after any suggested changes or additional content have been redrafted by the writer. This final process ensures that any errors in the revision phase are identified.

Regardless of the extent of the editing, I make sure that the writer’s ‘voice’ and style of writing is maintained.

 

Agent/Publisher submission editing package

If you’re ready to submit your manuscript to an agent or publisher who only requires the first three chapters, then this editing package is for you!

I will edit the query letter, the synopsis (up to 500 words) and the first three chapters (up to 10,000 words) of your manuscript.

Fee: $550

 

Proofreading

is the final stage in the editing process.

When I proofread I make sure that the writing is free from spelling and grammatical errors, inconsistencies and malapropisms (using an incorrect word that sounds the same as or is similar to the appropriate word by mistake. For example, ‘complement’ rather than ‘compliment’) that spell-check will not identify.

The formatting is also checked for consistency. I even check ‘facts’, place names and cross-references for accuracy.

Sometimes proofreading involves minor editing such as suggestions for improvement of sentence and paragraph construction.

 

How do I edit/proofread?

I use Microsoft Word’s online Track Changes facility.

I will return your manuscript showing all of the suggested changes and my comments and queries. This gives you complete control over the final version of your document.

As you read the tracked-changes version, accept or reject each suggested change. For an extra fee, I will also send back a ‘clean copy’ of the changes I’ve made because track changes look so messy!

 

Testimonials

Here is some feedback from authors whose writing I’ve edited or proofread.

Thank you once again, Denise. I deeply appreciate your assistance, especially considering the deadlines you had to meet. Your ability to perceive the broader scope and identify potential for further development in my initial draft was invaluable. It allowed me to enrich my story, adding layers of depth and meaning. Your edits in the second draft were seamless, expertly meeting the word count limit without compromising the overall narrative. (Cigdem Serce, October, 2023)

It has been a pleasure working with you on books one and two. I was gratified by your many helpful suggestions, keen eye for detail, responsiveness to queries, and genuine interest in the story’s development. (Brendan Frain, 2022, ‘Monuments of Grass’)

Thank you for all the good work, Denise. I am most grateful for what you have been doing! The comments are wonderful and very useful.(Assoc. Professor David R. Marshall, editor, ‘The Site of Rome: Studies in the Art and Topography of Rome 1400-1750. Melbourne Art Journal 13)

You were recommended to me by a friend whose thesis you’d edited and proofread. I’m so glad he did. Thank you so much for bringing to my attention the embarrassing errors I’d made plus helping me to express myself with greater clarity. I am so indebted to you. You were so pleasant and professional – and you delivered on time! I am now proud to submit my thesis.(Kim D.)

Thank you so much for all that hard work, Denise. What hubris on my part to have thought that there would not have been that many errors! (Patricia O.)

I was delighted with your final proofing on my last draft. So good to get some clarity on the colon issue and the capitalisation. I knew there were still some problems but it was really doing my head in nailing what was the basic principle–with your extra input I finally got it! (Ivan M.)

 

The road to submission

Traditional avenues for publishing are still alive and well, but the slush pile is always high. Therefore it is imperative that a well-crafted and edited manuscript, cover letter/email pitch, biography and synopsis are submitted. So many writers tend to rush this supplementary submission material.

Publishers and agents read the supplementary material first: if it doesn’t engage them immediately, or if they judge the writing to be sub-standard, then they may not read the manuscript!

As mentioned, I offer an Agent/Publisher submission editing package (see above)

 

Why not contact me soon?

I look forward to receiving details of your editing or proofreadig requirements via my Contact page or directly via my email: denise@denisemtaylor.com.au

Please include in your message/email:

A brief explanation of the level/type of editing/proofreading required

The word count of your document/manuscript

If fiction, which genre? If non-fiction/academic writing, what subject matter/field of research?

Deadline for completion

You will receive a reply from me that may ask for further information, including a sample of your writing.

Conditions apply and privacy/confidentiality is guaranteed. If you agree with the fee (and Terms & Conditions below) and wish to proceed, I will email an invoice.

When the fee/deposit is received a receipt will be emailed to you and the service will commence (upload your Word document).

 

 

 

Terms and Conditions

Denise M Taylor respects and protects her clients’ privacy. Denise collects personal information via her website, telephone calls, and written communications. Some of the information that is requested is essential for Denise to be able to provide her editing/consulting service, and some is additional information that the client chooses to provide. Denise will treat personal information with no less protection than that provided for by the National Privacy Principles and the privacy laws that are in force in Australia.

The client must provide full and accurate information prior to a quote/estimate being issued. The client assumes all responsibility for any problems or errors, as well as legal liability resulting from an incorrect statement of work. Denise reserves the right to deny or refuse service for any reason and without explanation. For example, material submitted that advocates violence, hatred or discrimination in contravention of national and international laws. Transmission of material which is virus infected, defamatory, obscene or pornographic is strictly prohibited.

The client does have the option to renegotiate the initial quote to allow for work of greater scope or duration should the requirement change mid-project.

The client entering into a contract for the service will retain the sole copyright, ownership and control over all materials submitted. It is the client’s responsibility to keep a copy of the work sent for editing or proofreading. In the case of Denise being unable to complete the project, all advance fees that have been paid by the client up until the point of termination will be refunded.